Friday, January 29, 2010

Jordan B.




Diego and Dora


Million years ago there was a constellation when you look to the right during all the seasons. Find the north star and you can find the two hands that join Dora and Diego. And here is their story.

5 million years ago there was a lonely duck, queen of the planet Jupiter. She was a beautiful duck and her name was Dora. Jupiter is a nice, warming planet were there are no fights, no problems what so ever because everyone loved each other. Until one very cold night, they had a visitor, Diego the Turtle. A single turtle who’s brother was the evil king of Pluto. Everyone thought that he came in peace, but it seemed like he didn’t. The people of Jupiter, thought that he only had one thing in mind, taking over Jupiter from Queen Dora. So the war began! Guns firing, people dying. Until the only two people that were left, are Queen Dora and Diego. They decided not to kill each other, they wanted to talk this out. It turns out that Diego did come in piece, he just wanted to warn the amazing planet of Jupiter that his brother, Damian is coming to take over Jupiter.
Diego decided to fight with Dora. When Damian reached the planet, they were ready. It was a pretty hard war. But the planet of Jupiter fought through it and got a victory! Damian had to leave with the 20 giraffes that were left. Dora thank Diego with all her heart because without her warning her about Damian, she would have lost a lot between the animals and her town would have been ruined. She also had to thank him because Diego saved Dora’s life when Damian charged after him. Dora could not thank him enough that she agreed to a night out. They had so much fun and feel in love. They grew old together and in the end died a happily together. Right after their death, a constellation of Dora and Diego holding hands. The North star is where their hands meet.

This was spotted by a women named Amanda Kaplen. She first told this story to her family and they told their family and friends and it just carried on for awhile till everyone knew.

5 comments:

  1. Jordan I really liked how after the war they fell in love and were friends.

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  2. I really like your story Jordan.. (: I liked the main idea and plot. Your creative details made it all more interesting.

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  3. This is really good Jordan:) You had good details and I loved the name Damian:) I also liked how you and Kelly combined your constellations to make your story. It was very creative!

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  4. Good job, Jordan! I liked how your story described the other side of the characters that were in my story. Very funny and creative :)

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  5. Great job Jordan! I really liked your story and I thought it had a good plot and real creativity! :)

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